Abridged Title: The Lost Guardian

My Title Debacle 

After getting some feedback from a few readers, I was encouraged to modify my book title to simply The Lost Guardian. Book number two will simply be In The Shadows. I decided to drop the “Immortal Light” portion because it is just a mouthful to say and some believed it weakened the face-value interest in the book.

In The Shadows

I’ve been working hard on book #2 and am pleased to say that I’m about 60,000 words into it (that’ roughly 250 pages). There has already been some conflict and a HUGE reveal. While I am excited about finishing this book, I’ve decided to take a short break from it so that I can focus on reworking my query for The Lost Guardian. I believe the biggest reason I’m not getting constructive feedback from agencies is because my query makes The Lost Guardian sound so anemic or run-of-the-mill. I need to spice it up a bit.

Wish me luck on getting an agent soon, so EVERYONE can get a chance to partake in The Lost Guardian.

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